thirteen reasons why poem

okay guys i do NOT write poems what so ever, so bare with me... i don't know how you set them up correctly but i tried for my guided response

i'm sick of this pain
when will it end
it's in the wrong hands now
i'm stronger than me
too bad you can't save me
too bad you weren't there
i'm sorry you had to hear it like this
but goodbye is here.

my next book

I'm really excited to read my next book. i chose thirteen reasons why. i heard it is really good. its about a teenage girl named Hannah Baker. she commits suicide, but before she kills herself she makes six tapes with two sides and the seventh tape only has one side making it the total number of sides, thirteen. Hints the title thirteen reasons why. she sends the tapes around in a box to the first person on the list. they then have to listen to the tapes and find out why they are part of what she did and why. it sounds amazing and i am anxious to read it. however,i am worried about is how its written. Will it confuse me going back and forth between what the listeners are thinking and saying and what Hannah is talking about on the tapes? So far it hasn't been too bad, but i catch my self here and there having to go back and re-read something that I've already read. i haven't gotten too far in the book yet but i am pumped to keep reading and find out who is on the tapes and why. :)

my point of view.

In my opinion, the strongest part of the text is the shooting, and weather or not Valerie should be allowed back to school or not. i believe Valerie should be allowed to attend Garvin High again. Even though Val did make the hate list, and she was nicks girlfriend, it does not make he guilty for what nick did. No one knew what was going on in nicks head that day he shot up the school. How was val supposed to know he really wanted to pick off the people one by one from the "hate list"? It is a hard subject for val to talk about. It takes a whole lot of courage to go back to school, Especially when she knows people may never forgive her for creating this horrible list. Valerie's mother is very cautious when it comes to Valerie. she is always asking questions and making sure she isn't going to harm herself or anyone else.

• What would you do if you were Val's mother?
• Would you be crazy and uptight about where Val went and who she talked to, and hung out with?
• What about her dad's "affair"?

 i know if i were Valerie i would be so upset after seeing what she saw that day she went into her dads office. if it happened to me in my life, i would never forgive my dad for what he did. but on the other hand i wouldn't want him to waste his time with a family he doesn't want to be around. it would be tough and i can't imagine how some people get through problems like that. but now a days its more common wouldn't you think?