okay guys i do NOT write poems what so ever, so bare with me... i don't know how you set them up correctly but i tried for my guided response
i'm sick of this pain
when will it end
it's in the wrong hands now
i'm stronger than me
too bad you can't save me
too bad you weren't there
i'm sorry you had to hear it like this
but goodbye is here.
Nice work, Presley. There's no "formula" for writing poetry. I like the fact that you chose not to rhyme. Sometimes forcing rhymes makes the poem feel artificial.
ReplyDeletehaha well thankyou.. its kind of weird for me to write poems cause i never ever do unless im forced
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